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4. jake and jim feedback

today two film makers (jake and jim) came in to watch our film opening and give us feedback. this was an eye opener because it was nice to hear someone's say who understand the industry.


after watching my film opening, although impresses, he did have some criticism to give. he believed that the music was a bit too dramatic. he thought that when it started to get tense and dramatic, it made him feel as if something was going to happen. his advice was that if i were to do it again, maybe have slightly less dramatic music and when the hand comes out of the ground, have the music jump in as well. although saying that, he said that because of that, the hand popping out was more surprising because he didn't expect that to happen due to the music being dramatic early on. I'm happy because that is what i wanted to achieve. i wanted that hand to make people jump.

he liked the contrast of the shots and thought that my location was fantastic. he liked my titles as well. he thought that visually they were interesting and he thought that it was good that they were spread out.

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