pitch 1: ideas

1-he's escaped and ready to seek revenge on those who murdered his school friends back when he was 15.

2-after hiding from the world a man decides to leave his sanctuary after hearing the city is overpopulated with evil.

3- a man who has nothing to live for is going to fight to save the life of those who treasure it.

4- the after life is well-worn for the unlikeliest of heroes who decides to rise again and fight evil.



i like my last pitch because it sounds unique where as the others sound over used and plain. my pitch sounds dark which is the approach i want to go for and sounds interesting to do. if i find the right place to shoot i could have a scene where something bad happens and then show the hero rising fro his grave. i'll have to represen the hero in such a way that shows he's good and not evil. most of the time people rising from the ground means they're ombies or evil in some way. the 'something bad' as i put it, doesn't need to be anything drastic. it could be as mellow as a purse snatching but i might explore this idea and think of something a little more adventurous like a killing or kidnapping. the most important thing though is finding a way to show the story in such a short amount of time. remembering that the title sequence or opening will only be a couple of minutes long.